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What went well in this sermon
- “Is it the child holding the mother’s hand, or the mother holding the child’s?” — not one theological term, and they still carry home that it is the Lord who holds on.
- “Feed the discouraged before anything else” is concrete and can be done the moment they leave. You built it on two passages, which makes it hold.
What to focus on this time
Leave them with one picture as you step down
Earlier you gave the congregation several scenes they could see with their eyes, but the conclusion ends in abstractions. People carry out what they heard last.
What you said“My experience, my testimony — these are not the standard of my life. I believe it is the word of God that is the rock building us up.”
Try it this waybring back one of the pictures you already used. You do not need a new image. Just return one of the scenes you have already shown them to the conclusion.